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To write an effective short essay, you need to add details and examples to the sentences you have already written. Details provide a fuller description of what you want to write about. Then one needs to write a specific example using a specific place, a specific time, a specific event for each sentence.

Example of Extended Paragraph

Title

Topic Sentence - the Top Bun

Type your topic sentence here. Be sure to limit it.

First Reason with Details and Example

First Reason - the Lettuce

Background or least important reason

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Details, Quotes or Statistics

In this section, you provide details about the first reason.
It may include the location, a number of restaurants or, in the case of academic studies,
quotes from experts that support your first reason.

Example Related to First Reason

This must be specific -- one time, one place, one event.

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Second Reason with Details and Example

Second Reason - the Tomato

In this section, give a more important reason, but not the most important

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Details, Quotes or Statistics

In this section, you provide details about the second reason.
Again, it may include the location, a number of restaurants or, in the case of academic studies,
quotes from experts that support your second reason.

Example Related to the Second Reason

This must be specific -- one time, one place, one event.

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Most Important with Details and Example

Third Reason - the Meat

This is the most important reason

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Details, Quotes or Statistics

Example Related to the Most Important Reason

This must be specific -- one time, one place, one event.

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Paragraph Conclusion

Conclusion - the Bottom Bun

Summarize the reasons in order
Try to end with a strong sentence

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