A paragraph of an essay is more than a recitation of research.
It has a "shape" that suggests you may know more than the readers.
Which of these two examples do you believe if more effective, regardless of the issue?
No Shape - Flat
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Plump Hamburger Shape
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... for three reasons
First...
Second...
Third...
In conclusion...
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...for three reasons
First...
Moreover...
Most importantly....
In conclusion... |

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